the baby winter peeks with miracles
of mists and snow while the autumn unfolds
hugging the paths with its warmth
leaves of passionate colours spread
on which the lovers sing and dance
and the baby winter throws a snow ball
for them to play and rekindle their childhood
the thread tying them becoming strong
by
Kritika
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Impressive about me is my eagerness to try everything. Self Motivation is a fixed gear of my creativity vehicle provoking me to dance to the tune of optimism. Yoga and books are the two transducers of this victim which have helped to be straightforward and open minded. Improvement is the second gear which is under construction and will always be undergoing changes simultaneously achieving different goals. There are other supporting gears with less of speed more of energy. This is KRITIKA π
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Beautiful imagery Kritika π
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Lovely images bounced in my mind while reading your beautiful words Kritka! β€οΈπ€ Cindy
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Thank you so much Cindy. I am happy to know that you loved the images formed by reading the piece. (Hugs)(Heart)
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You’re most welcome!!! It was lovely! β€οΈ
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Thank you π (heart)
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Lovely. This is one of my favorite pieces of yours.
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Feeling awesome to know the same. Thank you so much kindly π π
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Lovely π
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Thank you Era π (Heart)
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Very sweet poem with lovely imagery, Kritika. β€ I like this a lot! Take care, Cheryl
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Happy to know you liked the poem. You too take care π
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“the baby winter peeks with miracles” – what a beautiful opening line.β€
And what a beautiful rest of the poem.
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Glad that you liked the first line. Thank you so much kindly π
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Lovely poem dear Kritikaββββ I’m just not ready yet for that early “baby” winter yet here in Canada π₯Άπ¨π¦
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Glad you liked it. Thank you π
Okay savour the taste of Autumn π
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Beautiful images created, Kritika!
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Thank you kindly π
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My pleasure. π
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Oh this is delightful Kritika. I am captivated by the playfulness in this piece. π
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Pleased that you enjoyed ‘Baby Winter’. Though I find this piece incomplete but I had no further feelings left after the last line π Still trying to at least start digging but my laziness, I guess π
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Haha, digging into your laziness… I totally understand that π€£π€£π€£
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lols π
cheers!
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“the baby winter peeks with miracles” – ah, so so delightful!!! The whole poem. πππΌπ€π
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I am really happy you enjoyed reading the poem Lia. Mission successful π Thank you π
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A lovely, unique description of the beginning of winter.
Gwen.
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Thank you so much kindly for appreciating π π
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Beautiful flow. Fantastic title.
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Thank you so much kindly for appreciating my words. Happy you liked the title. π π
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