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silly me
I kept writing

about us

the sad page
said, ‘please don’t
it’s enough’

summoning you to me
in your arms
welcoming afflux
of unconsciousness
knowing
its totally my mind
to erase the thought
of having you besides

so
to the next page
I promised
a new me

with sincerity

by
Kritika
https://www.instagram.com/undressedthoughts

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43 Comments

      1. πŸ˜€
        I would love to join many more sessions with you but the internet connection here is really pathetic. I have to get it fixed this week. Probably next week or the last week of March.

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    1. Hey,
      How are you?
      I found Interstellar interesting on grounds that there is no limit to our imagination. Its beautiful how the human mind works.
      Would have to watch it again but what exactly do you think the ending should be?

      Stay Safe.
      Kritika

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      1. The part I had a problem with was the way he communicated through time and space. There are a few ways I would have ended it.

        1. Keep the ending just find some other way to communicate, the time space thing was too complicated

        2. He dies in space and the daughter starts on a path to save the world. Sets it up for a sequel but I would rather not have one and just leave it as a stand alone.

        3. The world just ends but implies there was a suitable habitat for human and other species searching for the same thing. A very down ending but I think American movies and television tend towards a happy ending for the sake of a happy ending and many times sacrifice the quality of the artwork in general. British movies and television doesn’t do that as much. Just look at the difference between both versions of the office.

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      2. Hmm I agree with the ways you are suggesting here. Some consider the ending to be perfect. Some have watched it around 9 to 10 times just to understand the concept. But really a sequel, I do not know if it would be great as I like it the way it is. I would not enjoy the sequel.
        I just saw 2021 is going to have a sequel released.

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